Research Changes

Based on feedback from my group and the teacher, I am on track and the only thing that my blog lacks is a thesis. So the only thing that I will work on is the thesis. I might also make changes to better connect the elements in my paper. This is because I feel like my paragraphs don't flow so well. That is why I am working on making connections. I will also form a thesis for my paper. There is nothing else I believe I can change. I have backed up my elements with examples from my blogger. All I really am missing is the thesis and maybe a better connection between my elements.